Junction Feedback for Second Rough Cut

Yesterday we went to the Junction and along with them informing us about the Fiver that we are going to be involved in, they also watched our second drafts of our music video and gave us feedback.

The feedback which they gave us was very useful, it is similar to what Nick has advised us to do and it will help us to make our video a lot better.
They thought that the outside footage of video didn't work well with the live footage. However, they thought that in some way it could work but to take the time to find out how, would take a long time which we don't have. We have decided to get rid of the outside footage completely to make our video. We are going to keep the live footage and work with it visually in Final Cut so it will be more interesting and gripping.
The judges at the Junction also thought that when they were watching the video, they could imagine the artist laying in the coffin throughout the song. This was because of what the lyrics was talking about and we thought that this could work but the chances of us getting a coffin is low.