Rough Cut Feedback from Mike

Today I completed my rough cut of my music video. I then asked a few people to look through it and Mike decided to give me feedback. 

The feedback which he gave me was that he thought that my video content was a good idea and that overall it was edited well. He also mentioned that once it gets started into the journey, it is works very well. However, he thought that it started off a little to slowly and needs to be cut down a more before the final edit.